One Wish

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One Wish

July 3, 2002, 12:14 am

If I found Aladdin's lampand made a wish,it wouldn't be for money or love,for those I have;it would be to set his world on fire.6/9/02

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Re: One Wish

July 3, 2002, 12:21 am

Welcome Sandy, I've liked your poetry for some time now & gladyou've decided to post something here.I think I read this first at TCP, it gives a nice slant on the Aladdin tale.Fine short poem Matt...

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OhSandy~glad you stopped by and left us this littleThough-filled poem...and your wish has been *granted:*You do set the world of your poetry fans on fire!! a fan" I've got to do something-- even if...

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Re: One Wish

July 3, 2002, 1:06 am

Hey, ~Red. Let me add my welcome to our fellowship of the pen!.was just thinking you could change the direction of this by adding 't' to 'his' in the last line RGFellowship of the Pen Need some...

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Re: One Wish

July 3, 2002, 1:15 am

OOps~~~OhSandy,I DID read it and reread it as "this world"...like Rg suggested...Your wish is still granted!!!" I've got to do something-- even if it's wrong!" ~ For Shir Visit me @ All In A Pen

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Re: One Wish

July 3, 2002, 8:25 am

I like this short delightful poem but like the others read 'this' inseatead of 'his' I wonder why?! It reads so much better of course with 'his'. I write in Allinapen

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Re: One Wish

July 3, 2002, 1:03 pm

Hello Matt...Thanks for the nice welcome..And what a nice comment about my frivolous poetry. Glad you liked this little magic piece.~~Sandy

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Re: One Wish

July 3, 2002, 1:08 pm

Hey Shir...How in the world are ya? I'm always stumbling across a new EZ board..and what a delightful find here...so many names I recognize.Thanks for the lovely comments, of course.Poetry fans on...

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Re: One Wish

July 3, 2002, 1:11 pm

Hello there RG.....Thanks for the welcome..I'm glad to see you here!I suppose I could change his to this...originally it was written for someone in particular..and I used the personal pronoun 'your',...

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Re: One Wish

July 3, 2002, 1:15 pm

Hello Jean..Oh thanks for reading and commenting. I'm glad you like...is all of the 'his&this' stuff RG's fault? heheheheeeeee~~Sandy

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Re: One Wish

July 14, 2002, 7:49 am

I was relieved when I read the author's explanation of the word being 'his' world. I do understand where she is coming from on that slant. When I first read it, I thought she was making a snide...

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Re: One Wish

July 14, 2002, 3:24 pm

Hi Jelapi...Thanks for reading and commenting....No snide remarks from me, hardly ever! I don't watch TV...how could I? heheheeee~~Sandy

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